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My Farewell
Contributed by
PoeticMidnight
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm exhausted with all of this wand'ring,
These same thoughts that always ravage my mind.
I don't know what I'm looking for, something.
That in humanity I'll never find.
Perhaps, 'tis love, though I know it's a lie.
Maybe a friend, though I know they'll just leave.
Might be a life, though I'd rather die.
Out of my mind, these thoughts should I heave.
My eyes are glued open, torturing me.
Forcing observations of this world, doomed.
I tore out my heart, 'twas useless you see?
Mine is a condition, not just a mood.
I think I'll just hug my bear forever.
I will lie down in my bed and I'll rest.
I don't want to breathe, not now or ever.
I'm tired of life, of this mental test.
To-night I shall smile for the first time.
I'll capture this moment, pierced by a blade.
I'm painting a picture, conducting a rhyme.
I am still smiling, decision was made.
Gagging in pleasure on this warm life broth-
That once pulsed angrily in my veins.
Death light is nigh, I draw near like a moth.
Some cruel life giver handed me the reigns.
Now, I'm as cold as the moon I admire.
Pale as the Pallas as quoted by Poe.
As stiff as the corpse impaled on the spire.
Goodbye filthy world! To rot I do go!
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PoeticMidnight
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2005-06-13 21:45:04]
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Re: My Farewell
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:49:13 PM AEST
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| very interesting quotes very nice write |
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Re: My Farewell
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:56:58 PM AEST
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Very sad.
prayers 4 u,
emy |
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Re: My Farewell
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:36:13 AM AEST
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woah, powerful write
i Love your rhyming style & i thought this poem was mesmerizing and honest.
well done to you, i wish you all the best. |
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