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Tears Of The Sun
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:11:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Life's a moment of death's eternity.
Numbered shadows lengthen
As moments will only be
Forever shortened.
It's just a scratch at the surface of forever,
An endless stretch of such a great endeavor.
Light will perish before darkness every time,
Because life decays with every death
That's buried in past minds
Who only wept.
Every perfect end will only fray leaving a morbid scar
Grieving beyond the clouds and above the stars.
The sun's now swallowed in dark wishes
Of the long forgotten memories
That still only misses
Shining brightly.
An eclipse of pureness is in a veil of darkness
That brims with flashbacks of only being heartless.
. . .
Death's a moment of your eternity,
And life only holds the shadows of any empathy.
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-06-13 20:11:09]
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:25:56 PM AEST
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You mean I get to be the first one to read this greatness??? hehe. VERY NICE!! Great job you two...Some really good wording in there.
Please do collaborate again!!
Scorp ; ) |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:00:24 AM AEST
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u two write awesomly together.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:01:51 AM AEST
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beautiful
well done you too, lovely thoughts |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:10:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, you guys did an amazing job :)
Great structure too.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:01:25 PM AEST
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wow that is very awsome write.
well done you two. |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by seriphsoul on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:16:11 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderfully composed piece, you two make a wonderful duo! |
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Re: Tears Of The Sun
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 02:00:58 PM AEST
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from title to last line:: perfect beauty!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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