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When you love Someone

Contributed by kill_my_soul on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 07:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

When you love someone so deep inside,
it seems like its so easy to hide
you've loved him for so very long
you would think he could do no wrong.

Everyday you would hope and pray,
that he would always stay this way
he treated you like you should be treated
you thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and wondered why
all you wanted to do was curl up and die
you thought your relationship would never end
but that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
you thought all those things were maybe untrue
two days later he was back the same
you thought you were the one to blame

He thought the relatioship was getting to serious
and that you had become a little too curious
by this time you knew it wouldnt last
all the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day
but this time god wanted to get his way
you wanted things back how they were before
but you knew this couldnt happen anymore.

It was a saturday night about ten O' clock
you heard the news it wasnt a shock
you knew this was going to happen soon
as you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.

Copyright © kill_my_soul ... [ 2005-06-13 19:46:41]
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Re: When you love Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 07:50:46 PM AEST
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a lovely write nice flow heartfelt message within the line
Michelle

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