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Silly ditty on life!
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:12:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ho hum go to and fro
Open the outside and make it flow
Take a breath and see whats there
To have whats wanted and always a flare
This write has no meaning what so ever
Just something that was written with hopes of acheieving
Acheieving a little comment from now and then
To see if anyone is really seeing
In a mood, of differ , yet happy
To make all see .life is worth living
Take what you have, and run with it.......it could be gone in a split second.
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brew
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Re: Silly ditty on life!
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:45:09 PM AEST
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That would make a wonderful little ditty of a song. In my day we had Marsey dots and little oats and lambsey divy. and it was a hit immediately. Sometimes those little ditties just pop into your mind, and until you get them written down........they haunt you until you finally sleep.
I'm so glad you share this one with me, I really like it, like the song that you probably don't remember.......since I'm an old lady, but it was also really cute. Ever heard Buttons and Bows? So many in my day~!
Really enjoyed this
Warm love to you brew
and thanks so much all your many comments on my silly ditties too!
Warm love
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Re: Silly ditty on life!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:04:07 AM AEST
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Take what you have, and run with it.......it could be gone in a split second.
Ne're truer a word spoken! one wise thing I was told as a child is "always keep a liitle bit back"
Cute ditty, nicely done.
Johnny.
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