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Flowing

Contributed by brew on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Butterflies..... you see
Become the beauty of elegant and being free
They flow with flutter, and catch ones eye
And make them want to capture.......something that should be free in flight
Its like being put on a pedastal
Being held hostage for one to examine
To look and awe, yet not really want
The extradinary of one beautys that is in the eye of that
But even if you are not perfect, you still attract........

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Re: Flowing (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:40:55 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! You said it all in one line Brew, But even if you are not perfect, you still attract! Wonderfully deep and very wise. This was a great poem my friend. I love butterflies, and when I wrote about them I said they are fickle too. You have to watch them, and be careful what you do around them too! They flit and flutter from flower to flower, and if you are not gentle they will never stay an hour!
Enjoyed this so very much
Warm love
and thanking you for all your wonderful comments on my poems Brew, may take me
a month to finally get to you, but just know very much I appreciate them
ConSue

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