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Speaking in dreams
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:04:35 PM in AEST
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I know I can breathe,
But I'm choking on dreaming,
While trying to hold in the tears;
I'm speaking in riddles,
But no one is listening,
As I tell everybody my fears.
I know I can speak,
But the words are just nonsense,
Swirling around in my mind,
I'm talking in code words,
But the key is still missing,
It's getting much harder to find.
I'm speaking in dreams,
But no one can hear me,
Though it sounds to me like a scream,
I'm missing the meaning,
Of beauty in feeling;
The answers just seem too extreme.
But I'm sighing in daylight,
In half tones of morning,
Where dreams break, forming the day,
And I'm dancing in knowing,
That nothing is certain,
Except that I'm here today.
The fears are still wanting,
Calling in terror,
To my dance between darkness and bright,
I'll let them stay screaming,
I'll carry on dreaming,
It's time that I took up the fight.
I know I can breathe,
But I'm lost in the dreaming,
Of nightmares and pleasures and peace,
I'll carry on speaking,
Till you know what I'm thinking,
The truth will grant me my release.
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Kie-Kie on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:09:41 PM AEST
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Wow Philly
I'm sorry you feel like you're being strangled and suffocated by your dreams, but I'm glad you still find joy in having them... *hoping I interpereted this correctly*
I think it was wonderful though, it seemed to flow just perfectly as I read it :D
Love ya,
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:20:16 PM AEST
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wow philly i agree with kie kie.
awsome write girl you express it very well.
hugs |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by feathercut on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:24:21 PM AEST
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| yea, nice write, i can relate to it, drowning in days even though their just puddles and all you do is seem to scrape the street in the shallow |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:00:32 PM AEST
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Brilliant phill but then when ain't you? lol
Ben |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:07:19 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by wakegurl77 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:18:09 PM AEST
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amazing write
i think i grasp what your saying and its kind of how my dreams are i get so lost in them that reality doesnt seem real then it dissapoints me so much i do not care to return
i hope this i right how i interperted it
its amazing the way you express it
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:29:15 PM AEST
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I will still be here listening and waiting till you find you, and you will. Excellent write.
Rita |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by MaMort on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:30:25 PM AEST
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| Wow, very touching. I can relate to it so much. It really is hard to explain, but yeah. Well done. |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:08:37 AM AEST
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Wow!!! What an emotional write. I think i know what you meant from suffocation on your dreams. I have felt like that before.
There's nothing more to say really. This was just well expressed and well writen.
Hugs,
Jane xoxox |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:44:46 PM AEST
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A powerful write. Sometimes the boundaries between dream and nightmare are obscure. I guess reality is reflected in our dreams....are our dreams reflected in our reality?...i'm not sure...
This is an impressive write
Will |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:59:16 PM AEST
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This poem has a definite flow, which goes well with the pull of the emotion. I think I've felt this way before, and been wearied and confused thereby. But I'm sure it doesn't last forever. Take care, my good friend.
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:17:19 PM AEST
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How I love to read and take in your lovely thoughts, that seem to torture you, and each time I read your poetry, I'm so glad you have your pen in hand. It's your very best friend in all the world. Will help you to figure things out in your Nocin'. Who would have through "Speaking in dreams" Only you, you are so talented and so creative in all that you do. Write, Write, Write, it's the best therapy around!!!
And know I love you
sending hugs and warm too!
consue |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Stitch on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:58:43 PM AEST
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Your poetry becomes more intriguing every time I pop in here. This held me right up until the end where the crescendo lay waiting. Marvelous. I had one question...did you mean morning or mourning in the third from last stanza? I couldn't help but wonder.
Stitch |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 12:11:20 PM AEST
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this is just so wonderfully breathtakingly beautiful phil, i love your choice of well woven words... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 06:42:01 AM AEST
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| There is so much soul, beauty and meaning in your words, I understand this more than you know. Good on you for producing an incredibly moving piece, Phil. Reading your work is an honour. |
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Re: Speaking in dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:34:47 PM AEST
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Definately something we all need to remember!!!
I know I shall try!
Well woven lil sis, in that special emotion filled way that you do it!! |
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