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HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:19:54 PM in AEST
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Butterflies don't really fly
Fish don't really swim
Cheetahs walk instead of run
What is wrong in this world
People aren't treated equally
As they were created to be
And still to some,
Color matters
HATE , PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
Who knew three words could mean so much
HATING someone enough to kill them
JUDGING people by the color of their skin
BETRAYING someone who loves you
What happened to HATE being a strong word
And never JUDGE a book by its cover
Or til death do us part
HATING, JUDGING, BETRAYING
Breaks all the rules
Maybe they were never meant to be followed
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:28:29 PM AEST
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very nice poem Am', alot of truth and insipiring too, awesome work, as always
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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I like this...not all of us break the rules though, hun. I hate the way the world is.
It's unfortunate, but it seems to be reality. All we can do is try to change it for the better.
Great write hun, there is truth in it.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:07:57 PM AEST
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| So true so true.you are wise for one so young.good write. |
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:11:33 PM AEST
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| excellent, well done |
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:03:38 AM AEST
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When did you ever become so smart LOL?
I really liked this Amy, you are right people still do treat others with the color of their skin. It's not right but that's how the world is right now.
We could only hope for the better. Amazing write Amyita.
Love,
Jane xoxox |
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Re: HATE, PREJUDICE, BETRAYAL
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:17:19 PM AEST
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Very moving piece. This represents the questions that many people in this world pose to themselves and each other every day.
Shannon |
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