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A little thought for some
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Beauty is inner deep , which shows through the skin and is not
yet broke the surface.
Copyright ©
brew
... [
2005-06-13 15:17:56]
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Re: A little thought for some
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:27:45 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I like the thought behind this, but it's not exactly a haiku though, as it doesn't follow the 5-7-5 pattern...
Still, nice few lines.
Phil xxx |
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Re: A little thought for some
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:06:39 PM AEST
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| I like it even though i have no idea what an haiku is. |
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Re: A little thought for some
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by englishprincej on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:30:03 AM AEST
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| I'm with the Vampire Queen :) |
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