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Dream
Contributed by
babyGurl_Monkey
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:35:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The days were too long
The nights too short
Every breath you took in front of me felt like your last
Your staring looks
The hugs
The smiles
The laughs
They all seemed to be slipping right through my fingers
The way your eyes seemed to make my stomache turn into butterflies
Seemed have disappeared with a blink of an eye
The way you made my smile
The way you made me laugh
It all seemed to have been a dream
Like a fantasy
Maybe it wasnt real
Maybe it wasnt true
But i know it all felt like a dream
And i wish i was never awoken....
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2005-06-13 14:35:27]
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Re: Dream
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:40:52 PM AEST
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| very good...it remnds me of my poem 'the hill'. just so u know...i've felt like this twice and i still do. |
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Re: Dream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:52:01 PM AEST
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i love this! especially the last 4 lines. beautiful...truly amazing. well-written, you can feel the writer's feelings, and that's always hard to do....
awesome write
- Beth - |
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