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Lost
Contributed by
reilt
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Lost inside
this vast ecosystem
of yours
Calling, calling.
All the world's a blur
I'm impaired
or scared
Perhaps both
None
and nothing to those who matter
Crawling, crawling
in this space
where my thoughts echo
In my head
heavy, heavy
Heart is worn
or torn
Perhaps the two
And broke
shattering into
a deep, deadly silence
that haunts and strands
In a place
not my own,
not home.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2005-06-13 14:28:35]
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Re: Lost
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:48:24 PM AEST
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0.0...wow...deep and good. very real. I know the feelings...all of them...good work.
*~~*~~*We are the bleeding clouds, and from the seas of blood we have come. We are witnesses; we were brought into being by an inferno of suffering; and we are a sign of peace to you.*~~*~~*Tsubaki |
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Re: Lost
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:28:18 AM AEST
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| This is sad and reminds me of where I was less than a month ago. I hope where ever you are that you have hope now for a better brighter future. |
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