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I am
Contributed by
lunartune
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:17:25 AM in AEST
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I am
I am the silent tears shed in the fading light
And I am the memories written gracefully in the night
I am the ring on your finger that reminds you of how you feel
And I am the quiet song that describes too you what is real
I am the one intangible thing that you can hold
I am the difference between like, love, young, and growing old
I am the floorboards you walk on when you'd rather be stepping on sand
And I am your life in all the ways you forgot how to remember it
All the ways you hadn’t remembered to plan
I am your vision blurred by tears of joy and pain
And I am your courage
That you find you need at the strangest times
But it's always there anyway
I am the special feeling in your heart that tells you to jump
I am what tells you to fly
What gives you wings to sore the sky
I am hope and nothing more
I am everything and nothing less
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:49:40 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT! I loved the imagery you've created and the soft flow to awesome love that everyone should have in their life! Great Write!
I look forward to reading more of your work! Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: I am
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by wakegurl77 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:47:26 PM AEST
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sounds to me like your describing your soul
good write |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:40:08 PM AEST
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it's amazing how you describe yourself...absolutely wonderful. my favorite line:
"I am hope and nothing more
I am everything and nothing less"
it speaks of confidence, and much more
great write
- Beth - |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:45:16 PM AEST
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u use very strong words in this piece.
its beautiful
well done |
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