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Break up
Contributed by
streamingdreams
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:50:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The smile you gave
I used to rave
am I still allowed
The twinkling eye
that never cried
But is it still dried
And Ican't remember
What caused us to dismantle
the close relationship we shared
What was it?
Flying away
Trying so hard
I really want to be free
Yet still crying over the past
Replaying how I was crushed
by you
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2005-06-13 09:50:23]
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Re: Break up
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:14:12 PM AEST
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nice little poem. very easy flow. and easy to read.
good job. |
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Re: Break up
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:30:38 PM AEST
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| i like it. especially the end. |
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