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If only i had you
Contributed by
starry_eyed_soul
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:27:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You seem to be there everyday
To wipe off all my tears
You always know just what to say
To drown away my fears
Youre the only one who could make me laugh
When i was about to cry
Youre the only one who cared enough
When i felt like i wanted to die
You are the friend ive never had
But made up in my mind
I wish i had a friend like you
But i didnt so now goodbye
This is my lonely suicide
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2005-06-13 08:27:54]
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Re: If only i had you
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:28:01 AM AEST
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oooo i like this. i love the way "this is my lonely suicide" fits in there its like a total amazing punchline to this awesome poem.
wow.
hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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Re: If only i had you
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:59:56 PM AEST
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i love this.....its very good!!! keep writiing cuz ur awesome at it...
ps thanx for the comment on my "infatuation or love" poem... |
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