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COVER UP
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:22:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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white paint
to cover the blood
no lights
so you wont see the smudge
hard top
you can't cut underneath
black light
show the write at my feet
stereo
to drown out my screams
pictures
make you think what it seems
lies
thats all that is known
knife
to take breathe from my own
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spazz911
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2005-06-13 08:22:44]
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Re: COVER UP
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:55:37 AM AEST
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I agree... the world can't seem to see what is there
As if everything is covered with a layer of grime and sometimes I wonder if they are really blind or if they just pretend.Superficiality...
Your poems great!
Keep it up.. |
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Re: COVER UP
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by secretwind on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:45:40 AM AEST
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| In Illusions we all thrive to survive. |
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Re: COVER UP
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:44:25 PM AEST
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| Interesting style on this poem, I like it a lot. The subject matter is sad, of course, but I know that deep down you are strong and I have lots of faith in you. |
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