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mockingbird
Contributed by
spazz911
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Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:03:00 AM in AEST
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singing lark plays on the hours
a tale that it will tell
after fading truely sour
it rains out all its hell
close enough to feel the heat
yet not so far astray
pouring ashes blading backward
grasses in its grave
what was true and right begone
time has washed away
stuck in unjust fantasy
that is the world today
sweetly it proclaims its time
and wishes best of will
but hidden ore the apple grove
a flying heart it kills
stabbing fastly, shortening breath
lets out one cry of hope
kills that fellow mockingbird
and sets the world unknown
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spazz911
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2005-06-13 08:03:00]
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Re: mockingbird
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by crystalfire on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:29:02 PM AEST
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| Nice, I like this poem. Good rhythm, simple language, deep meaning. Good job! |
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Re: mockingbird
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 01:23:56 PM AEST
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beautiful in its simplicity. i like it
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Re: mockingbird
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by DracosBloodyWrists on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 05:01:52 PM AEST
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This is a very well written poem. I like it. very simple and enjoyable. Great Job Keep writing
Asha |
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