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Take Advantage of Me
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:40:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Take Advantage of Me
I want you to take advantage of me
Though I only met you a few moments ago, soon I’ll have myself to blame
But I’ll still give you a go, so let’s mix pleasure with shame
Throwing myself away tonight, like a tattered rag without a use
This appears to be so right even though this is called self abuse
Exploitation of my young body, disrespect for my mind
This giving of my soul so casually, due to desperation I am blind
Come on take advantage of me
Just pretend to love me as I spread my legs and let you in
Pretend to lift me up when I am low
For I am so empty within, fake you care despite the obvious I know…
That you’re taking advantage of me
Like I said I want you to, but deep down inside
I’m…
So very ashamed of all these things I do
Yet I still let you take my best; no one will ever want the rest.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-06-13 03:40:36]
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Re: Take Advantage of Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:53:33 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
It sends a loud sound to the reader. Even tho it's sad it's still a masterpeice.
huggs,
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Re: Take Advantage of Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:40:18 AM AEST
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Great job with this....chilling to say the least...
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Re: Take Advantage of Me
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:38:23 PM AEST
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Awesome job Rach, Glad to see you posted it..lol...As always
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Re: Take Advantage of Me
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:57:10 PM AEST
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This is really a sad situation.....
Jenni |
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Re: Take Advantage of Me
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:43:22 AM AEST
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beautifully written,
this reminded me of a song, "i want to save you" by something corporate..if you havnt heard it already, i strongly suggest it.. |
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