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Recycled Lover
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Only with you
Do my feet go numb
Do my tiresome legs feel
They can suddenly run
Only in your arms
Do I feel at ease and calm
The taste of your honey
Melts my face
And the beat goes on and on
Our feet meet
Under the table
Locked eyes
A retina trembles
Its suicide
Yet you resemble
What I once felt inside
Nothing I despise
Nothing that breeches
Something so spontaneous
As loving you
As remembering
Something brand new
________
____
When the ticking clock strikes its dot
The thickening story begins to grasp the plot…
Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-06-12 21:58:31]
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Re: Recycled Lover
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:06:00 PM AEST
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this is a great write but i think i would have looked for a better word than Recycled brings back lots of bad memories when used with lover
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Re: Recycled Lover
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:16:12 PM AEST
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She sure sounds special Jyss...Nice write. Can't wait for the story to unfold...
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Re: Recycled Lover
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:55:05 PM AEST
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"sent shivers down doriens spine..."
Bravo!
Art is meant to gather reaction..whether good or bad..It's purpose is to do such things..
and you've accomplished that.
B
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