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Flower Girl
Contributed by
sinned
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:53:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hot was the day
The alter was trimed
Yellow roses intertwined
Season early May
Outside under a gazeble
A few mumered of the heat
Then the sound the wedding beat
She was five and adorable
As pure as an angel in her white dress
Eyes so clearly blue
Slowly steping under a golden hue
Her blond hair done in the finest French twist
Her smile matching afternoon rays
Her look as if you dare
One must wonder can the bride compare
Yellow petals float then gently lay
A finally at the alter she dumped her basket
Swingng it up over and all around
As if to say; There I'm done then dropped it to the ground
She went left the ring barer right
Smiling all the while
Waiting for the bridesmaids she twist and whirle
All the bridesmaids another wonderful sight
At the alter poudly stood the groom
Music changed to "Here comes the Bride"
The flower girl her eyes open so wide
Her cheeks as a red rose in full bloom
All heads naturally turned
Old men smiled as women cried
Pure beauty was our bride
The groom as handsome and so atuned
He had reason for his big smile
His bride an hourglass petite figure
Her face lite brighter than the brighest fire
Never such beauty walked down an asile
I said the flowergirl stold the show
At least she stold a page
The bride my granddaughter pride of old age
The flowergirl another of grandpa's pride she is my
granddaughter also
Sinned
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Re: Flower Girl
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:14:48 PM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull.
One can feel your pride in these words.
huggs,
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Re: Flower Girl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:33:30 AM AEST
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This was a wonderful write.
I especially liked the way you set it up.
The rhyme was unique. THe words you used to set the mood and bring up the imagry.
Wonderful! Great work. You are a great writer keep up the good work.
Keep writing
Keep smiling
Sweetstranger |
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Re: Flower Girl
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:33:03 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write with so much love and it was good to read. I wrote a poem about my daughter I never met she was born well I was here in Iraq. But this poem was much better then the one I wrote. Take care and thank you for sharing a poem of the greatest love to brighten my day. I see my little girl for the first time in 13 days its going to be amazing. By for now and keep up these unstoppable writes my friend….Steve |
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Re: Flower Girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:11:37 AM AEST
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| hey fantastic poem ,, I likee,, |
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