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The Pharos Of Your Soul
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Is it wishful thinking?
To believe that you really love me
To feel that the pharos of your soul
Shine their lights just for me
In your eyes I see
Projections of heaven, of an overcasting love
A beautiful, gracious destiny
You have given me back my faith
You are the undersetting for my hopes
My dreams can not take form without you
I will always treasure the shimmer
Of your wings in the
Night time sky when you
Avow to me that you are an angel
You tell me I gave you wings
But in truth you gave me mine
You are my sole religion
A church built up of stars
That brightly shine with love
For all the world to see
You are more than everything to me
You are always there for me
I will always be just for you
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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this is one of your best john, just AMAZING and such beautiful words you used.
i loved this
"In your eyes I see
Projections of heaven, of an overcastting love
A beautiful, gracious destiny"
oh well done, you are such a sweetheart and lovely poet!!! mwah x
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:58:41 PM AEST
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"You are more than everything to me
You are always there for me
I will always be just for you"
Thank you, muaw.
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:44:09 PM AEST
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A beautiful heartfelt write..
B |
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:00:10 AM AEST
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| It is a nice loving poem, but certain sentences I don't understand. I would venture to say that English is not your native language ? Such as " My dreams can not take form with you" and what do Pharaohs have to do with her soul. I think basically the majority just did not understand the poem enough to make comments. Sadly, that is just the way it goes. Just my humble opinion. Rita |
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:31:28 AM AEST
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I'm no scholar but I don't see anyone can say anything other than masterpeice about this write.
It's really beautifull and touching.
someone is very lucky.
awesomely beautifull.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Pharos Of Your Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:56:05 AM AEST
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This was such a beautiful poem. I love it it's simple and well put together.
Shes one lucky lady for you to write such magical words.
Jane xoxox |
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