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Internal Shadow
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:15:06 PM in AEST
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Shadow creeping on the wall
Watching me closely with every step I take
I turn around so I can catch it
But it is faster than the speed of light
Breathing harder
Getting really scared
In need of a protector
Where is one when I need them
No one came to save me
So the shadow took me in
When you see a shadow on the wall
You'll know it's me
And when the time comes
If you have no one to save you
I'll do what it did to me because
I am now a shadow
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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2005-06-12 20:15:06]
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Re: Internal Shadow
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by brittaney on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:16:58 PM AEST
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Good write. Colorful language!
Brittaney~ |
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Re: Internal Shadow
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:28:22 PM AEST
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| ::turns on the light:: and now you are nothing =] you told me your concept and i dont think you really portrayed it well enough for people to understand it, even though you bluntly say it at the end. |
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Re: Internal Shadow
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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| great write reminds of of the movie they |
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Re: Internal Shadow
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:53:43 AM AEST
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God have i missed your poems. I liked it Amyita
Hugs,
Janey xoxox |
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Re: Internal Shadow
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 05:22:50 PM AEST
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Amy-
Hey long time no talk. I'm sorry I havn't been commenting much life hasn't been that great right now, it will get better though. Soon I hope. Anyway I really enjoyed reading this poem u are writing really wonderful poem's:):)
Well I better go I have to go work soon.
Love,
Care
p.s. email me sumtime |
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