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I'm Still Alive
Contributed by
KayeRains
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:50:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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What would I give
for a bit of peace
or at least
some peace of mind?
What have I not given?
I've given my all
and know no peace
of any kind.
A darkness gnaws within me.
We wicked are granted no rest.
To cease the ache, I'd take my heart
and I'd rip it from my chest.
You see,
I've got to find some solace.
I've lost my will to carry on...
I cling to what is left of innocence
because the wholesomeness is gone.
And now...
I tire of my nights spent crying,
The intimacy lonliness and I share.
Why couldn't one kind soul give me a chance
and take the time to care?
My own desperation makes me sick.
Am I so incomplete?
I'm incapable of being weak; alone,
Of feeling obsolete.
How could anyone understand me
when I can't comprehend myself?
I dread being left and then forgotten
gathering dust upon the shelf.
All I have are words
and I read them in my head.
God though I know I'm still alive.
I mostly feel half dead.
And I hate it.
Copyright ©
KayeRains
... [
2005-06-12 18:50:28]
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Re: I'm Still Alive
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:57:36 PM AEST
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| Superbly well written poem, very well expressed. I hope you are able to leave these feelings behind you :) |
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Re: I'm Still Alive
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:03:03 AM AEST
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very haunting & sad words to which i can honestly relate to soo much. the last year of mine has been filled with pain & i can have also felt as If I am the living dead, living but inside emotionally dead
well done i really liked this poem & it was very touching for me.
i wish you all the best and happiness |
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