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Suicidal girl...
Contributed by
youngpoet
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 05:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicidal Girl
Standing in a little room upon a small chair,
All my little sister Katie did was sit and stare,
For i was only seven and she was only two,
she didnt know about what i was going to do,
The loose rope around my neck i knew wouldnt tear,
after i had stepped off that small tiny chair,
At that exact moment Katie burst into a cry,
could it be that she knew i was going to die?,
But if i surely was going to pass away,
there would be no more beatings from my mommy or work to do all day,
no more swearing hitting or wacking with a big huge bat,
no more having to watch my daddy kill my poor old cat,
no more purple bruises scratches or scars,
no more having to watch my older brother steal cars,
if you think this sounds bad you're not the first,
these are just the good old days.. it'll often get worse,
I heard a click as mommy's head poked from behind the door,
i sprang from the chair and jumped towards the floor,
The last sound i heard were screams of terror and fright,
and my little sister's cries because i killed myself that night......
the sequel to this poem is "a note left upon the table"... thanks so much for reading
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Re: Suicidal girl...
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by vampyrekiss on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:10:10 PM AEST
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| Holy ***** that was really good. Im sorry if this is a true story also If you wanted to kill yourself at 7. If this isn't then you have a really good use of words. Good write I am off to read your other one. |
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Re: Suicidal girl...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:08:24 PM AEST
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Amazing write!! Welcome to YPDC... Wow!!
Jenni |
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Re: Suicidal girl...
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by judasman on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:58:37 PM AEST
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| disturbing read this, disturbing because this abuse goes on and the authorities do nothing until its too late and then all they do is pass the blame and say they did all they could. this brought a lump to my throat, |
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Re: Suicidal girl...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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wow, your writing is very anguished and sad omg your very talented and I think I have read one of your earlier posted poems......very painful
but you are very good, keep it up |
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Re: Suicidal girl...
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by jtkzlimz on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:18:23 AM AEST
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wow i love that it was amazing your a very good writer pleaze write more i love those types of poems i write them too but not as good as yours
nay-nay |
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