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RAGE
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:50:35 PM in AEST
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Treacherous suppression,
Enduring slap after slap of your iron fists,
Smiling every time you’ve stabbed me,
With your dagger words…
“Thank you, sir, may I have another, sir!”
Relentless abuse,
Physically, mentally, emotionally,
SEXUALLY
Don’t cringe at the word, you know you did it,
Savor it like you tasted my lips, Daddy,
Cherish it, caress it, oh so lovingly,
Like you did with my tainted body, Daddy…
Why can’t you look at me now?
Is it because I’m a mirror image of you?
Is it because you feel like you’re touching yourself,
Fondling your diseased flesh,
Perceiving nothing but your lust-filled eyes…
Oh no, Daddy, those are my eyes,
Liquid amber sorrow,
Pleading for you to stop…
They’re not your salacious, greedy orbs of tiger hazel,
Dominant oranges and greens, piercing, penetrating deep,
So deep… like you wished to be, right, Daddy?
So deep inside of me?
I know you’ve thought of it, numerous times,
When you watched me sleep, dreaming of better times,
Dreaming of hope, dreaming of a new life,
Without you haunting me…
I’ve kept quiet, I’ve stayed silent for too long,
Your threats of death don’t scare me,
Let it come, give it to me,
Give me death, Daddy,
Just don’t cry those damned counterfeit tears of misery,
I know you won’t miss me,
You don’t love me… you love my body…
You love my pain…
You forget that I am just like you,
Same caramel colored skin, same lips, same face structure, same nose,
Not only do I have you outer appearances,
But I have your merciless fury,
Sleeping deep within me…
Waiting… waiting… waiting…
Waiting for that moment,
That one touch, one word,
To make me snap,
All moralities torn away,
Only animal instinct and perilous rage,
Consuming me… BECOMING me…
Until justice has been served…
And you lay lifeless at my feet…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-06-12 16:50:35]
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Re: RAGE
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by Zeldianus on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:48:02 PM AEST
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Very nice. Very powerful! If I was your father I would be so ashamed of myself for doing these things and then I would have a serious wake-up call after reading this. Well done. I hope things get better for you soon.
Hugs and Kisses,
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by judasman on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:19:24 PM AEST
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| very powerful this. i can almost feel the anger and pain. people like your father deserve nothing |
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:23:07 AM AEST
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Very, very, very sad but well written.
Huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: RAGE
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:26:57 AM AEST
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oh very powerful!! ur words were very honest and this poem touched me, I am so sorry and am very saddened to hear that your own father took advantage of you like that...it breaks my heart, it really does. but this write is amazing and I really enjoyed it
i wish you all the best, you deserve it.
p.s pm me anytime k |
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Re: RAGE
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by LostSoul666 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:55:20 PM AEST
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| wow....i liked it a lot..im sorry to hear about all that..i hope things get better for you really soon... |
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Re: RAGE
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:33:45 AM AEST
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well this was very difficult to read I hate
reading about how people have been abused
it angers me to say the least. I hate injustice
and I want to see it stamped out from this
earth and I am sorry that this happened to so
beautiful a person such as yourself. I hope
however that this helped you to release all
your feelings and by the looks of it it certainly
seems as if that was the case. You are in my
thoughts and prayers hunny.
Hugs,
Joel |
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Re: RAGE
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:14:36 PM AEST
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this was an excellent write filled with emotions....
you brought a tear to my eye.
thank you
and be well |
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Re: RAGE
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:43:38 PM AEST
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| It is truly amazing how much emotion and power you can portrey with just words...Rage.. it such an understatement.. just reading this can fill a person with the same rage that you portray with this wonderfully written peice...yet it also fills one with a deep sorrow for the pain the abuse that you have been forced to endure.. i can relate in a way... only it was not my father....You are such atalented writer... it is just sad that it takes such horrific exsperices to be shown so powerfully... Wonderfull yet sad write..... |
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:44:38 PM AEST
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Wow! An amazing write. Very deep, very dark, yet truly amazing.
Carol |
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Re: RAGE
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:42:54 PM AEST
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My cousin was abused and no one knew till she was older just what scum her father was, She took him to court and he had to serve eight years behind bars so little time given for the torment she had to endure. So innocent and an angel that a demon of a father took from her
(((HUGS))) for you loving angel. May justice be served
Love Angelxxxx |
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