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Cry Me A River

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:17:41 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



There you go...

A walk down memory lane
on future love it puts a strain

3 a.m booty calls----
to one who wishes she never knew you at all

Wallowing in self-pity
Oh, poor YOU---it must be so ******

Here the broken record plays...
beginning to think this is NOT a faze

The only thing tied to Fate
is who's heart is made to wait

What will be will be...
those stuck in the past may never see

Past loves; never to be replaced
your poetic words come across two-faced

Awww my heart breaks---these tales of woe
stop mincing your words, and start to bestow!!

DOES THAT MAKE YOU WEAK??!??
I better shut up now, before I really speak....

Here I go.




Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-06-12 15:17:41]
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Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:24:33 PM AEST
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OMG, I have heard this same old song and dance so many times with a love in my life. I was so stupid. It had nothing to do with love on his part. Co-dependency on mine. Girl, I hope you eventually see it and walk away too.

Rita


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:38:35 PM AEST
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mmmm... k. (I've been here too long. I'm starting to see parallels!) Anyway, I can sense your frustration here which is well indicated. It's almost a slam poem even, although those are usually longer. Good write, scorp!


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:34:59 PM AEST
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Great write, very well expressed, I wonder why often times the one we ache for is the one who can break the heart. Well done!

Leia


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:50:53 PM AEST
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Compelling to say the least. I like it and I am sorry you are suffering so. I know first-hand what it is like.

Hugs,
-Seth


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Jyssvw on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:01:43 PM AEST
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wow scorp..that was truely an amazing work of art...you are better then i thought...awesome job with this one


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:21:23 PM AEST
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I'd love to hear the part
where you really speak.. lol

great write..

B


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:38:12 AM AEST
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i like very much, and can greatly relate to your thoughts.
be strong, because no person has the right to continually hurt you


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:36:41 AM AEST
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Wow what a mean and a very in your face write. Its good to get these things out and sometimes people need to here this when its true in their life. Yet another good write and its good to see you get these emotions out. Take care I’ve been gone for a few days but its good to be back on and read your work. Bye for now….Steve


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:58:44 AM AEST
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A provacative write that seems to exprees the uncertainty of remaining is such a painful relationship. Sounds like there is a real need to be candid and let loose with how you feel. Ah, but sometimes we worry if the other party can tolorate our candor. So we treat them as though they are fragil....the status quo....

A very difficult situation, one many can relate to. Thanks for sharing

Will


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:50:34 PM AEST
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Wow! i love your delivery! It's original and in you face! then, just before you're about to really let em have it.....you let em off the hook? how bout round two? anyways great write and thanks for sharing this emotionally charged piece. dw


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 05:44:51 PM AEST
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your poem i like. i am now a fan.


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:27:56 AM AEST
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Bitter perhaps, but interesting and thought provoking nonetheless.
I like the style of delivery here.I guess sometimes when we walk down memory lane the sun is shining and all is wonderful, other times it is pouring with rain and all we can think about are the darker times
Well done

Steve


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:49:04 PM AEST
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i love the saying, "cry me a river, build a bridge, and jump off of it" =] excellent show of feeling, scorpaporpa (that is my favorite nicname to call you if you havent noticed =]) i liked the beginning line and how the ending line ties in to it. your rhymes are on target, you know that capitalization is very good in moderation, you censor your own poems, theres a point, gets across emotion, and written well. you say you are not so great, and i can only disagree. oh yes, how can i forget originality?


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:42:32 PM AEST
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nice poem, something i feel everyone can relate to thnx


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:45:23 PM AEST
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And dont it hurt. Brilliant hope things get better for u

Love Angelxxxx


Re: Cry Me A River (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:09:10 PM AEST
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Now that's got the Scorperiffic attitude!!!! WOW!




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