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no1 dad
Contributed by
lau
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:16:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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i plan to give this poem to my dad if i have the strength:
number one dad they expect me to say
number one dad
the best anyones ever had
buy a card
A mug
a badge
number one dad
the best anyones ever had
a card to be given
of joy
of happiness
number one dad i will smile and say
as i wipe the tears away
cause my dads number one of course
as he used to say
im going to beat u up today
number one dad i'l say
best anyones ever had
at punching
and smacking your daughter
number one dad
the best anyones ever had
il say
il put in the card
as i think back
at the screams
the pain
the nightmares
the tears
and you being everyone of my fears
lv lau x
please comment
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lau
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Re: no1 dad
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:58:18 PM AEST
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I like it, I would never have the strength to give that to my dad.. please be careful! I hope it goes ok. Nice write.
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Re: no1 dad
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 01:33:27 PM AEST
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| aw babes thats so sad...(tear) made me cry... |
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