|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Touched By God's Right Hand
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
|
My mother and my lover,I need you to be brave
I watch you as you softly weep, beside my silent grave
I see the poems you put there,they are all addressed to me
I hope you finally realise, my soul has been set free
I watch you as you toss and turn,when you both try to sleep
And as you do I hear the angels sigh and softly weep
They sing their song to tell you,to try to make you see
I am no longer lonely, they are looking after me
Please my darlings, don't be sad, for I am now at peace
From all my pain and troubles,I have found such sweet release
And though I know the both of you feel we are far apart
I'm sure I'll live for ever buried deep within your heart
I am here all around you,I'm with you everywhere
I'll send a soft white feather, just to show I'm there
So now my two dear loved ones,please try to understand
I'm very safe and happy,I've been touched by God's right hand
Copyright ©
gwenevere
... [
2005-06-12 13:33:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Touched By God's Right Hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:15:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WOW
well done
well done |
|
|
Re: Touched By God's Right Hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:17:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An amazing write..
You're flow and finesse are flawless.
Such beautiful saddness..
5 stars from me
B |
|
|
Re: Touched By God's Right Hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:32:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i feel like crying. this was well written. thank you for sharing. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
