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Stairs
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:22:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I climb these stairs with heavy heart
I am in shreds, just torn apart
My spirit down there in my shoes
I feel betrayed and so abused
I climb the stairs to be alone
Safe from harm, here in my home
Did I deserve the things they said?
I climb the stairs to get to bed
I climb the stairs to think things through
I really thought my friends were true
Perhaps they fooled me all along
Now I know I must be strong
I climb these stairs, I wear a frown
Weight of betrayal brings me down
And as I almost reach the top
I hear a key inside the lock
And as the door swings open wide
I see my lover step inside
He smiles at me and all is well
I race to him, my woe to tell
We climb the stairs, my heart is light
I won't be alone tonight
Here he is my own best friend
True and faithful until the end
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-12 12:22:54]
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Re: Stairs
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:04:55 PM AEST
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Nice write. I love a happy ending :-)
Peace
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Re: Stairs
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:07:02 PM AEST
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written so very well..
I love the finesse of ALL your work..
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Re: Stairs
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by kellerkins on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:24:22 PM AEST
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| It's really calming and nice. Good job!
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Re: Stairs
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 12:46:09 AM AEST
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| this lit up my face...what an expressive, happy piece! |
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Re: Stairs
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by tres_estrellas on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 06:16:30 AM AEST
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| Very nice. If only everything were like that last verse! |
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