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Carried on every sound
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:41:23 AM in AEST
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Lifes a kick ain't it
Just sit back and look around
Such foolish ya can imigine
The sound of confusion in the air
Mixed with the ever questioning why
Lisen to the air as it swirls around
you
Carrying every sound
Not that its not real
Its all real
Look with your eyes
Look around Feel the events that surround you
Touching those emotions and flowing with the flow
Human weakness
Human frailty
Its like an Old song
We all sing it Once in a while
I will try to work to work it out again
Alone as it should be
Alone to say
Never say never once more
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-06-12 11:41:23]
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Re: Carried on every sound
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:12:02 PM AEST
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Why do people say that,"never say never ? " Sometimes things are never. I feel the emotions here. Great piece.
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Re: Carried on every sound
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:52:48 PM AEST
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Nice job with this! I like the way you ended it, and you ramble quite well!!
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