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INNER C-0-N-F-L-I-C-T
Contributed by
gina
on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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MIND
Remove the curtains blocking your sight
Allow your eyes to see the light
Recognise the wrong from the right
I've never seen a heart so white
HEART
Everyday i beg and pray to change
It's taking me in a way so strange
I still beat but i'm not alive
I only exist to be torn and rived
MIND
You stupid thing,where's your pride?!
Get over..wings of new hope try to ride
The world is still large and wide
Nothing deserves the way you hide
HEART
Easy to say..so hard to show
Can't forget,can never let go
Can't control the way i feel
Even time didn't work to heal
MIND
When there's a will,there's certainly a way
But i guess you're enjoying like this to stay
If you listen to me ,i'll make you see
That nothing is hard for you and me
HEART
Too broken to try another love
Too hurt to fly again above
I'll never be you,you're wise,i'm not
Tigers simply can't change their spots
Copyright ©
gina
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2003-01-05 02:20:00]
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Re: INNER C-0-N-F-L-I-C-T
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by Mystery_Girl on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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| Wow.....what an amazing write......i have a problem with heart and mind.......my mind says no no dont...but than my hearts just goes for it..........and it hurts me alot too..... i loved this...............take care.......:-) |
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Re: INNER C-0-N-F-L-I-C-T
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by OreO on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 05:57:57 AM AEST
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I would have to say Gina that this one is your "Masterpiece" This is so true, and how the mind and heart are at constant warfare with eachother, and based on this is how people make decisions in every day life, i think this is such a beautifully written deep write and it's i do beleive my favorite of yours.....thank you for sharing this one girl you keep writing...your talent is shining through so heavy....
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Re: INNER C-0-N-F-L-I-C-T
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by Opium on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 08:40:05 AM AEST
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...your talent is shining through so heavy....
heheheheh I like that, well it is a great poem but I don't believe it is like that the way our heart and mind work ...it's all about testosterons and hormons :P ...don't say I'm not romantic! |
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