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Flowers and Cologne
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:02:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A tingling so intense that it rumbles and my stomach quakes
A sense inside my brain not one mistake it makes
Burst out the door so quickly feet could fly
A rush more great than anything’s best high
Thrown into him and my arms I fling
All the emotion, how my heart could sing
A playful kiss from me and my flirtatious mood
But his romancing has my spunk ensued
And so I melt for him adoringly
Then flows our love sweet and outpouringly
I nestle close and find a sweet repose
Cologne’s sharp smell lingers beneath my nose
Bouquet of flowers chosen so suitably
A kiss of thanks comes irrefutably
The matchless roses paired with orchids bloom
Much like the love that overwhelms the room
Our love is perfect, that one can presume
The flowers blossom oh so fruitfully
Their smell brings memories restoringly
Mixed with cologne the moments are renewed
Tingling returns along with ev’rything
Why it’s as if he were again so nigh
The fragrances create euphoric wakes
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liquidsunshine
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2005-06-12 11:02:10]
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Re: Flowers and Cologne
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by freckle on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 07:25:02 PM AEST
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Your poem is sweet and I'm glad you got a nice guy and can share such perfect moments. They really are quite wonderful....treasure your memories!
Carol (Who has a nice guy herself) |
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Re: Flowers and Cologne
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:52:28 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem Chels. Im so happy for you and Jarred. He sounds like a keeper so don't let him go.
Amazing write Chelsywoo
Jane xox |
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Re: Flowers and Cologne
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:18:53 PM AEST
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congrats on being together so long. I don't
believe in love but nevertheless I thought this
was a beautifully written poem it was just so
poetic. I loved the rhyme scheme you have
written a masterpiece here my friend!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Flowers and Cologne
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:38:14 AM AEST
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Well done! Congradulations. I aplaud you for the pain I now you´ve endured for love´s sake. It is worth it, in the end. May your love always outshine the pain it brings along.
Take care.
David |
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