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Box Full of You
Contributed by
brokenbutterfly
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:09:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You see just a box
A plain, old cardboard box.
But that's not what I see.
I see a box full of you.
A box full of us.
All my memories, all my love.
Our first kiss is in that box
It's a glass pepsi bottle.
Our first date is there too:
A pair of movie tickets
The first time you told me you loved me.
That's that silver ring.
Even our first real fight is there.
It's your sweatshirt.
My hopes and dreams and everything in between
Are letters and secret notes.
But what represents what tore us apart
Is the one thing I still need.
It's my heart, though, it's no use now.
It's shattered shards fill that box,
That box full of you, of us,
That box by the curb.
Copyright ©
brokenbutterfly
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2005-06-12 07:09:31]
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:37:16 AM AEST
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| sentimental and touching. nice write. |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:43:15 AM AEST
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| well expressed, beautifully written |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:12:02 AM AEST
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Brokenbutterfly
Sad,angry,filled with pain.
Beautifuly done with your pen
I know of some pain you went through
A girl I loved pure and true
Her love and heart I couldn't unlock
At a cold curb I sat in a box
Nothing,but trash
One true lover cannot last
Please write more
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Re: Box Full of You
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:53:49 AM AEST
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| very original! you have a great talent |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:01:44 AM AEST
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Nice write I too need abox by the curb Good write.
Whisper |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:45 PM AEST
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Yet again your expression astounds me...Excellent write, and I too, have a memory box----by the curb as well...!!!
Scorp. |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:25:07 PM AEST
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wow...this poem went right through me..
first couple stanza's..I was like..
"how sweet is this??"
but the end really got me..
an incredibly heartfelt and sad write..
5 stars from me.
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:39:44 AM AEST
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Excellent idea and well presented.I enjoyed each new thought as if it were an unopened birthday present.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: Box Full of You
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:57:19 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was great. I have a friend who this poem would REALLY apply to. I too kept a box of stuff from my ex boyfriend. Great job and for being 15 you have a wise mind and very good expression. |
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