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why
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:08:47 AM in AEST
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you ever woke up and missed you life
have you ever lost hope in finding a wife
you ever lost your mind when the right women comes in view
did you ever lose your soul when shes looking at you
have you ever lost your love hoping she might be there
behind that corner or in the next chair
searching the web my love musy be must be soon
the woman i love the our soal will bloom
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2005-06-12 04:08:47]
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Re: why
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by lonelywolf04 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:55:29 AM AEST
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| i mis the way my life use to be all the time have i lost hope in findin a wife hell i have lost hope in just finding a girlfriend altho i thank u mean soul not soal and u have somethis repeated but other then that dam good job |
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Re: why
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST
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| a bit of touching up and some word alterations would make this a fine verse. |
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