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Leaving Love Waiting
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A window into the subconscious
You provide a glimpse of loveliness
As your feathery stroll passes
I stare and in silence ask for a blessing
Strictly a goddess and no less then angelic
A perfection of beauty radiates
The night expecting
The passion
It anticipates
A marvelous beginning
To the love that awaits
__________
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-12 03:25:51]
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:19:20 AM AEST
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It worked for me-terrific poem, lovely imagery, flows well, really uplifting.
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:33:04 AM AEST
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I like how your style seems to change with everything you do. It's almost impossible to pick favourites.
I like how this almost rhymes, but how it really doesn't.
Awesome images.
Great poem,
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:31:37 PM AEST
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A very short and adept way of indication anticipatory emotions. I like this.
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:12:47 PM AEST
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flawless..
your style is second to none..
(no puncuation...marvelous)
so surreal..
an excellent write..
5 stars from me on this..
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:09:59 PM AEST
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pretty, gives hope
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Re: Leaving Love Waiting
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:53:42 AM AEST
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LOL! You sure are a skilled writer, to be able to write so convincingly of something you don't feel!
I wish I could do the same...this is a beautiful piece of fiction. Very nice.
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