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The Ever Elusive Heart
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:11:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Its mystery shrouds all of sience in
Darkness,
the principles can not be explained
through somthing so simple as a formula
It defies science
It defies reasoning
and it defies your mind
for it is not the fathom of war that
kills me,
It is not the poverty and violent
streets that subdued me,
It was love's sweet tender kiss
This affection that inflicted, the
pain that keeps me restricted,
It is love, that has created the
threatened feeling
This awe I feel of serenity, that I can
not even begin to see,
And how could it possibly be;
Not war, violence, or poverty, has threatened
my life so much,
I chose you out of the bunch, I picked
you for your softer touch,
love is what burned the tree
It was love that killed me.
Copyright ©
Hakiokusaken
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2005-06-12 01:11:17]
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Re: The Ever Elusive Heart
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:26:55 AM AEST
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wow, i really liked this poem. your sentiments are very beautiful and your wording is very desirable and reaches the heart. i like it very much
just one tip though, you might want to check ur spelling before you post! other wise well done though! |
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Re: The Ever Elusive Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:51:05 AM AEST
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| apart from a couple of spelling errors it was a decent poem. well done. |
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Re: The Ever Elusive Heart
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:16:42 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: The Ever Elusive Heart
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by midsummerdream on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 03:19:32 PM AEST
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| omg this is really good i love all the adjetives you and the mystery you give the poem im so glad your sister told me to check your poems out your really good |
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