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tainted emotions
Contributed by
Chaser
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:00:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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oh so much she plays with me
and how she can never see
how my torn heart will never be
as it was before she and i became no longer we
as she made my hopes touch the sky
she cut off my wings so those hopes would die
and forever as i look up high
all i will be able to say is why
for my love she did abuse
and my possessions she did use
and my heart she did lose
she was my first love
more pure and beautiful that a dove
but she had another
and to her i was like a brother
so forever more shall i have no lover
for there will never be another
like Rachel
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Chaser
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2005-06-12 01:00:36]
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Re: tainted emotions
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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you've done a great job and i really enjoyed reading this poem, i could really sense your pain and yes there is nothing worse than heart ache. I have been through a similar ordeal as yourself so I could relate to your sentiments. I am sorry for the pain you must be feeling, but maybe someone else will come along and treat you in the way you rightly deserve. so anyway, i liked this poem very much. good luck to you
luv Rach x |
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Re: tainted emotions
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:05:52 AM AEST
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Touching write however Even the bravest Eagle will soar. Thanks for sharing
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Re: tainted emotions
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:11:41 PM AEST
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I'm beginning to feel like a broken record here...Seems like a lot of poetry I'm reading nowadays is tales of woe...Past loves...never to be replaced...From the sounds of it, it would be a GOOD thing if there isn't another Rachel...!!! She clearly wasn't the one for you...Hang tight, and you'll find someone worthy of your affection one day...Nice write.
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Re: tainted emotions
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:47:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful and so very touching especially the end. I really enjoyed this.
Nice write.
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