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From the Pain
Contributed by
Jameskistner
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:52:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish my tears emptied my sorrows
from every today and all the tomorrows
and every night when I'd start to cry
I'd think of you by my side
you could comfort me I'd comfort you
and make you smile when you were blue
why did you end what we had?
if you were so special why am i mad?
can't you see what you meant to me
i saw more than the eyes could see
in you, you were, my everything..
the cool rain that deadened my pain,
like my hearts band-aid when it had broke,
you fell off me so i wrote...
how could you leave?
is this the end?
did you love me?
or was it pretend?
give me another chance
to dance the last dance...
I'm sorry you didn't know
how much i loved you...
maybe someday
you'll let me show you..
Copyright ©
Jameskistner
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2005-06-11 23:52:41]
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Re: From the Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:50:01 AM AEST
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this poem really touched my heart....having not long ago going through much the same experience as you so I do how this feels.
very well written poem, filled with a lot of pain and mixed emotion. well done & good luck to you. X |
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Re: From the Pain
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by Rikki on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 01:20:12 AM AEST
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This one is very good James, I'm impressed!
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