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bruises fade
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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once upon a time
there was a girl
who had to learn
to grow up w/ all the pain
it hurt to see
the marks of pain
across my back
once you were done
i would cry
up in my room
hoping
it would all be over soon
over time
bruises fade
but the pain
remains the same
i still remember
how you kept
me so afraid
over those years
every morning
that i wake
i look back
and im ok
ive been wondering
why i carry all this in
but its you
who helped me put up all these walls
dont you understand
the damage you have done
for you its just a memory
but for me it still lives on
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Re: bruises fade
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by imagenuinefake on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:25:43 PM AEST
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| Very good and powerful. This is true art. |
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Re: bruises fade
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:40:58 PM AEST
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Excellent write. I love the weekends just so I can read the latest writes. Thumbs up. Excellent write
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Re: bruises fade
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:35:08 AM AEST
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Heartbreaking but powerful write. I hope the physical aspect of this is at least in your past...With time even the memories start to scab over...Take Care.
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