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tell me

Contributed by visualizing_life on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:13:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

tell me
its not real
tell me
i dont see you w/ her

you told me
you were done w/ her
you told me
you only loved me

you told me
you wanted to be w/ me
you told me
you would never hurt me

so tell me now
you still love me, not her
bc of what i see
my heart is breaking

i hear you
tell her things
you never
said to me

how could you
tell me all those things
and not
mean anything

i ran home
to cry on my bed
not a word
to my mother was said

father came home
late that night
looked at me
from left to right

he saw me hanging
from a rope
he took out his knife
and cut me down

on my knee a not was found
dig my grave, dig it deep
so no one can see
i died for love

Copyright © visualizing_life ... [ 2005-06-11 21:13:45]
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Re: tell me (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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not a word
to my mother was said

father came home
late that night
looked at me
from left to right

he saw me hanging
from a rope
he took out his knife
and cut me down

on my knee a not was found
dig my grave, dig it deep
so no one can see
i died for love

you need to ask mick to insert a footnote for you..
this is a part of another poem I've read many times before..(.tsk..tsk..tsk..)
keep it real my friend..
make them your own.

Man_On_High

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