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Shadows
Contributed by
Shado
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Stalk me as you please, taunt my pitiful being...
Oh course you deserve to make fun of me, since I am a lesser being.
I'll serve as your amusment, I don't have emotions anyways.
Forgive me if I don't understand why your superior.
Don't treat me as a pawn, my breakdown is meaningless.
I'll never have a use, never deserved to be born.
Im an incubus, a worthless peice of nothing.
If devasation seems to follow my path,
Then why are you behind me?
Is it that your desprate?
Was your mockery false all this time?
Now its my turn to proclaim my "truth"...
Why are you any better than me?
My exisitance is flawed, why are you here?
Is your only purpose to be my downfall?
I have only one answer to that :
"Not Tonight"
Copyright ©
Shado
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2005-06-11 20:52:43]
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Re: Shadows
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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aww... i liked it! but, yes, it is sad. i really liked this write... it's really good. keep up the good work!
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Re: Shadows
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:30:21 PM AEST
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Bravo Excellent write.
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Re: Shadows
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:44:52 PM AEST
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I may have posted this under "angry poetry"
but there is much saddness wrriten ..
so truth be told-
I would've posted as you did.
great write here..
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