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Her Dark Corner.....
Contributed by
LostSoul666
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She sits in her corner everynight
hoping to win this everyday fight
when it will end nobody knows
as far as the rules anything goes
cutting deeper and deeper to release the pain
hoping along with it her misery will drain
but it never does, it just gets worse
nothing can get rid of it, for its a curse...
she cuddles up in her dark corner tight....
so nobody can see her in the light
in that small dark corner is where she lives...
shes broken and has nothing left to give
she had a golden heart
that was soon torn apart
so in the dark is where she hides...
nobody can hear her silent cries...
she wants a normal life..
but its too late, so she depends on her knife..
cutting away her aching pain
shes wasted so much time on this game
tears running down her face
dripping from her chin onto the case
mascara and eyeliner runs down her cheeks
into the room the light slowly peeks
she slits her wrist and quickly passes out
her life has escaped her, death has taken its route
blood running down her scarred wrists
dripping from her cold finger tips
the light shines in her corner once again...
showing her body, this is the end..
the fight is over and she has lost...
her bottled up life was the cost..
there are no more tears running down her face..
down by the bloody knife they found the case...
filled with illegal pills of many kinds...
and a folded up note left behind....
Copyright ©
LostSoul666
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2005-06-11 20:32:29]
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Re: Her Dark Corner.....
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:02:14 PM AEST
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good poem... but i really, really say that you should NOT cut/kill yourself. i know it's a hard habit to break, but i want you to really try. it's not a great thing to die. you would hurt people and come on... that's some good writing ^^^. i may not be a great advisor, and i can't exactly stop you, though i wish i could. it's a good poetry... good flow of words, but i really don't want it to turn out true. okay? well, wishing you the best of luck!!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Her Dark Corner.....
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:48:51 PM AEST
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Bravo Excellent write That . It hit home . It made my heart race as I read it. Excellent pictures captured in the readers mind. Strange I could see me self there once too. Thanks for sharing .
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Re: Her Dark Corner.....
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:31:48 PM AEST
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deliciously dark..
I love the dark works..
(hope ya not really doing this though)
Good job
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Re: Her Dark Corner.....
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by Disgraceful on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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| Yeah girl! you write some ***** good poems! im anvious you!! this one i like the most. |
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