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Faded Flower
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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'Tis but a little faded flower
but oh how very dear..
It'll bring me back to a golden hour
of many a forgotten year.
I may not to you all impart,
the secret of its power
but treasured in my heart of hearts..
I keep my faded flower.
Where is the soul that doesn't keep
within in its inner core
some fond remembrance. hidden deep
of days that are no more?
Who has not saved some trifling thing
to remember in the now
the memories that they shall bring
in wellness to endow?
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Re: Faded Flower
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:26:31 PM AEST
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I understand this very well. A precious token of a time past. My husband made me a band-aid ring to give me when he proposed. He wanted me to pick out what I wanted and being a doctor that sufficed for the time being. When he died, I found it among his possessions in the same box my real rings came in. I will treasure that forever. Some things are not ever forgotten and memories are never diminished.
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Re: Faded Flower
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:33:12 AM AEST
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this is a very nice poem
well done
great write |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by wizard on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:05:15 AM AEST
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dear mr. high,
it is true that many a secret are stowed in everyday objects, and nothing seems to bring back the fondest of memories as do these objects....something as simple as a faded flower can stir such emotion, and you've conveyed that message quite nicely.
wiz
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Re: Faded Flower
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:38:46 PM AEST
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Wow Billy---another good write. You express yourself so well. I just actually commented on another poem dealing with the same subject, and again I'll say, I can absolutely relate.
Scorp. |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:38:42 PM AEST
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| many years have passed since losing her......small remembrances do endow wellness at times.....a smile perhaps through the tears....thank you....this touched that part of my soul...... |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:22:09 PM AEST
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this is a great write wow
i can so relate coz i had a girl who kept
every little flower i gave her in her diary
i think flowers should ever fade
but if they do they are not any less beautiful |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:22:36 PM AEST
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this is a great write wow
i can so relate coz i had a girl who kept
every little flower i gave her in her diary
i think flowers should ever fade
but if they do they are not any less beautiful |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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| Great write, i have a tendency to keep little stupid sentimental things but it's the memories that they being back to mind that i can't part with. Awesome job. |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Masked_Man on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:42:12 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of my father.
he died last year.
Thank you for conjuring a warm memory
moh.
MM |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:18:22 PM AEST
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Oh Billy....this is awesome!!
I am sooo guilty of this.... I have so much stuff tucked away it isn't funny.... like a little note on a scrap passed to me at a staff meeting from a teacher I had a crush on...
Sigh.... now I've got to go get out his pic...and reminisce...lol..
Thanks for the memories..
Jenni
BTW...GREAT write!!!
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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| =] i absolutely loved this one, i think ill read it three more times in fact =] |
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Re: Faded Flower
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 08:54:20 PM AEST
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Billy~
You simply blow me away with ur remarkable poetry my dear friend. This masterpiece adds to the rest of ur extraordinary work.
Precious memories of the past, tokens once given. These last forever. You brought back alot of memories with this Billy~ Thanks so much for giving us the pleasure of reading ur remarkable poetic masterpieces. I bow to your excellence my dear friend.
love from ur devoted fan,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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