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Untitled...
Contributed by
LostSoul666
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the blood drips from her wrists..
the pain so hard to resist...
the visible tears fall down like rain..
as her body begins to slowly drain...
shes so tired of hiding...
her body and mind are dividing..
shes slowly slipping away...
more and more each day...
not knowing who she is or where she belongs..
someone who understands is all she longs..
her hate and lies start to combine...
but never once do you hear her complain or whine...
she blocked everyone out, and lives in her own land...
shes alone, theres no one around, not one demand...
you will never understand her...
shes an unsolved mystery, so cold and bitter..
in her made up land, theres no one around...
no happiness of any kind, not a sound..
no one to save her from her own harsh death..
she slices her throat open as she takes one last deep breath....
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Re: Untitled...
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:55:53 PM AEST
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wow.... extremely powerful. i liked it and i wonder how you beat me to writing it. really, i hope this isn't about you. because if it is, i have to say that we all have problems and difficulties, but we shouldn't end our lives because of them. believe me.... i know. and there are times i want to grab the knife, but i don't. i fight it. now, tell "her" that she shouldn't do any harm to herself. it's just not smart. i did like the poem though! keep up the good work! and i hope everything turns out okay for you!
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Re: Untitled...
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by LostSoul666 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:28:09 PM AEST
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| I guess youre right...but i have my reason for doing what i do....i try not to...heh...but why try anymore?.. |
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Re: Untitled...
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:00:31 PM AEST
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| great poem, it really moved me. keep up the good work!! |
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