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Beauty in the Inbetweens
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:31:06 PM in AEST
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Stop.
Look.
Open your eyes for the first time and realize
He can make something beautiful from the pain.
There's beauty in not knowing,
Beauty in the inbetweens,
After the light but before the dark.
There's still beauty in those painfully red colors
Bleeding as the sun goes down,
Covering the calm, shattering the blue.
Breaking the day.
So stop.
Look.
Even though the dark will come,
The sun is still more beautiful as it falls,
Revealing more than the ending of today
But revealing the blessing of the promise of tomorrow...
A second chance for what's left.
And fears will seem so trivial,
Because God didn't paint black in with the sunset.
Black comes after the beauty of red,
And blue will come after the beauty of black...
Someday.
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by inoc on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:35:53 PM AEST
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I found this poem so interesting....
what a lovely way to paint a day....
cheers Coni |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:43:21 PM AEST
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| very interesting... i enjoyed it.... it makes you think... good writing.... |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:30:33 PM AEST
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My sweet darling Jenna. One day you will be with them all again, Your dad, Courtney and Jacoba. There is no fear as they are all with you everyday. My heart aches for the loneliness that will be from not seeing her, but you know where she is and she will be your angel.
I love you so,
Rita
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:48:09 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh honey, I just heard about your sister and I am so terribly sorry to hear of your tragic loss. This is a beautiful, but painful write, and I hope you know everyone at ypdc will be praying for you and your family, and sending you strength....Take Care.
Scorp. |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 05:26:19 AM AEST
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A emotional heart wrenching poem. I'm so sorry for your loss Jenna.
Your words are so captivating and powerful. Im sure Jacoba will love this.
Love,
Jane xoxox |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 05:50:02 AM AEST
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Oh Jenna... I wish there was something I could say...
I am praying for you sweetie, for all of you.
Rita is right...you will be with them again some day.
I'm here if you need a shoulder or an ear.
Phil xxx |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by freckle on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:30:58 PM AEST
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Jenna,
I am so sorry to hear about Jacoba. What a beautiful tribute poem you have written. It is so hard to lose those we love. As you know from your other losses, there will be good days and sad days. I pray that soon; the good will outweigh the sad. My prayers are with you and your family. *hugs*
Carol |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:16:50 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry, Jen.. My heart goes out to you..... You and your family wil be in my prayers...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:02:38 PM AEST
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| Your dependence on God amazes and encourages me. Know your sister is now singing praises to her Savior now. God bless Jenna. |
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Re: Beauty in the Inbetweens
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:14:13 PM AEST
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I'm sorry it took so long for me to reply sweety... this poem just hits close to home and every time I read it I get choked up... it's beautiful...
I'm so sorry to hear about you sister... *hugs*
I'm here if you need me... but you knew that already
Take care and remember we all love you...
Love always,
~Kiela~ |
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