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My faithful light
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starry_eyed_soul
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:18:21 PM in AEST
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(opening)wandering... out in the danger
i take a chance... with you there by my side
now its me and you... i hope we can survive this
cuz its late at night... and you are my faithful light
my faithful light
(chorus)we walk alone as we walk along
holding hands as we fade into the night
no one to save us, no one to help us
its just me and you and that is all weve got
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Re: My faithful light
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by inoc on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:39:10 PM AEST
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Can't wait to sing it all....
so far so good...
well done
cheers coni |
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Re: My faithful light
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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i like what u got down so far, but i dont' no wat ur rythm is so idk where to go either
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Re: My faithful light
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 07:15:54 PM AEST
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What you have is beautiful..
Start out slow tempo...
*****we walk alone as we walk along
holding hands as we fade into the night
no one to save us, no one to help us
its just me and you and that is all we've got
Ok so I added this.. you may have already completed the project.. but here is what came to me..
Is't this love all we need we have come so far
Both of us one added star
To the lovely heavens above
Just you and I in this love
I like this part sing it twice or even three times.. I love it
*****wandering... out in the danger
i take a chance... with you there by my side
now its me and you... i hope we can survive this
cuz its late at night... and you are my faithful light
my faithful light
I changed it somewhat..
*****Wandering out in the danger
We both take a chance side by side
Just you and me, can we survive
cuz its late at night, you are my faithful light
My faithful light..
Oh well, it was fun.. I like your write.. let me know if you did complete it.. I would love to see the finish.. your finish..
RLPoetess ; ))
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Re: My faithful light
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:43:18 PM AEST
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I really like this and I think if ya add on a little more the finishing will be awesome. I'm just wondering if you've finished this. Would love to see/read the whole song.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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