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Disappear
Contributed by
Shado
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:34:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Somber visions stalk my mind.
Shadows follow me where ever I go...
There is nothing more to think,
and nothing more to say...
With this dagger in hand, looking to the sky;
My cry of anguish will remain unheard.
Why isen't anyone here?
My own lover has left me,
Longing her has became a physical ache.
I've sat through all those tearful nights
asked nothing in return.
Where is she now?
All I know is that I'm shrouded in despair...
At once you wouldn't get out of my head,
now you wont get into my sight.
Am I scorned by you that much?
Or is it your wish to leave me in obsurity?
Appears you want my cadaver to decay into musk...
One last breath of freedom,
one last breath of pain.
This nightmare will end now,
And so will I.
Copyright ©
Shado
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2005-06-11 16:34:36]
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Re: Disappear
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:05:18 PM AEST
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Sad, emotional piece...Well done.
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Re: Disappear
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:31:19 PM AEST
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ahh but if u leave now, how will u ever have the chance to b c ur lover alone? dont wanna miss that
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Re: Disappear
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:08:11 PM AEST
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a good write here, very emotional. but, i have to say that it's not worth it to end your life because of her. i know that it hurts, but it will pass. please, don't end your life. i'll miss this work ^^^. wishing you the best of luck!!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Disappear
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by youngpoet on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:47:23 PM AEST
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very deep.. emotional.. sad, i love it.. but its not worth dying over. theres so much left to see in life, so much more experiences, and so many other people to meet. i mean, dont get me wrong.. if you read any of my poems.. u can clearly see that they're suicidal.. especially "my rainy days" because its about my life. But even when things get tough.. just keep strong, take a deep breath and take it one step at a time.
Best of luck to you:)
Lauren |
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