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Among the crowd
Contributed by
starry_eyed_soul
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 03:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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among the crowd
there is a girl
thinks shes in love
with this one boy
a simple arrow
flew through her heart
filling the void
she had once forgot
but think again
an arrows end is sharp
words of piercing pain
spoke to rhythm of a harp
this combination
not too rare
of a beautiful love-struk melody
sung without a care
the boy broke her heart
he left her without a glance
she couldnt believe her eyes
looking on without a chance
behind the hidden meaning
of this tragedy
is a girl filled with hurt
that no one seems to see
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Re: Among the crowd
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:00:50 PM AEST
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honestly, this is all too true, and I feel that on this site I have found more ppl to understand me, and care then anyone I know, then anyone who knows me yet doesent, and should, if ya know what I mean, Keep writing, its beautiful!
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Re: Among the crowd
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by Shado on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:51:53 PM AEST
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| This seems relative to many people, not to mention the simplistic word choice allows many people to connect with the work. Good job ^.^ |
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Re: Among the crowd
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by spazz911 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:07:06 AM AEST
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what are you talking about this is a great poem tiff, truely truely true (lol) i like how much it doesn't get caught on fancy stuff and is straight forward (and true^)
keep em coming
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Re: Among the crowd
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:36:39 PM AEST
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A sad, emotional and touching piece of poetry. I loved the way u brought this across to ur reader. Keep penning and I shall read more of ur wonderful work
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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