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Penetrated
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:56:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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In a blistering and confusing life,
A spark of hope and sanity,
Quicker than the rest,
Painfully real
Silently looking back,
Searching,
Reaching out for that little light in the darkness,
And then,
They are found.
Two serene orbs,
Filled with oceans,
From before these times of constant acceleration,
When all was more beautiful than anything now.
And those two spheres,
Containing the same stunning beauty,
Are suddenly all that can be seen,
All that can be felt,
All that exists.
And they won't be pulled away from,
Things just can't go back to before,
There is no life without that ecstacy,
And after turning away,
It will be a dream,
Gone before they could truly be understood.
And I...
Just
Feel
So
Penetrated
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
... [
2005-06-11 14:56:37]
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Re: Penetrated
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 03:57:10 PM AEST
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Omgsh beautiful and true, to me the roaring is like an extasy, like a full body orgasm, and dont believe it will never be the same. It will someday after all that is ment to happen does!
----You write like a true poet, and that I see you are!!!!!!!
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Re: Penetrated
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:35:02 PM AEST
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an emotional write indeed!
the title says it all..
I love the way you arranged the last stanza..
a smack in the face..every word-
5 stars from me..
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Re: Penetrated
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by ShesAKillerQueen on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 02:02:27 PM AEST
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definitely a beautiful write, keep it up!
~Kreamy |
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