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More than a Promise
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I had wings of an eagle,
I'd give them to you to fly.
If I had your favorite toy,
I'd give it to you to enjoy.
If I had a heart of love,
I'd give it to you to share.
If I had a soul of innocence,
I'd give you reassurance.
It's more than a promise,
It's more than a prayer.
It's more than a dream,
That I wish to come true.
But no matter what I do,
It's not good enough for you.
I've given you all I could,
But it's never understood.
It's the loneliness I feel,
I try and pretend it's not real.
You make that impossible,
You've turned unreliable.
I wish you still had your love,
It made me feel like a dove.
But now that's gone away,
Slowly in each passing day.
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Mild_Tempest
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2005-06-11 14:56:33]
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Re: More than a Promise
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by pollypocket on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:23:47 PM AEST
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wow, I know that feeling. Like you'd have given everything and it never would have been good enough. That's a great poem. Very real. I will give you 5 stars! whoo hoo.
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Re: More than a Promise
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by pollypocket on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:45:49 PM AEST
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| I think the title you already have is great. :) it represent what you're trying to say very well. Thanks for the nice comment!!! |
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Re: More than a Promise
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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| Perhaps it's time to stop giving.sometimes you can give to much and you can get taken for granted.Unfortunately some people don't realise what they have got and the best thing to do is walk away |
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Re: More than a Promise
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. Especially the first 2 stanzas, but the rest too.
great job!
Keep up the good work |
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