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alone
Contributed by
lau
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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im wanting to
i have the urge
the sharp touch
the adrenaline rush
the slight fear
the tense atmosphere
and for what
a scar
as my trophy
and unwanted reward
it cant be ignored
or covered for ever
but it was me
me who started this
me who will have to face it
ALONE
please write comments
lv lau
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lau
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2005-06-11 14:37:07]
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Re: alone
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:42:28 PM AEST
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i feel like this tonight.
but you've enlightened me, on some bitter truth... so i won't now... and i strongly hope that you don't either. |
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Re: alone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:11:12 PM AEST
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I just read another poem on self harm, by, imagenuinefake , the poem is, gun it down, I too commit self harm, they say it is away to numb the pain you feel inside, you are never alone whether you are a religious person or not , your not alone when you hace Christ Jesus, and on this site ppl really do care keep writing or email me on here!
I hope to hear from you!
XOJILLOX |
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Re: alone
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:21:55 PM AEST
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awesome that u resisted, it is really a huge step, always think of having an unwanted scar for a trophy, well keep fighting
kc |
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Re: alone
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by imagenuinefake on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:29:11 PM AEST
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I don't cut anymore cause the scars are difficult to hide.
Lovely piece of art! |
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Re: alone
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by judasman on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:02 PM AEST
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| THE GRATIFICATION OF SEEING ONES FLESH TEAR BLOOD FLOWING. THE DISEASE WHICH NOONE TALKS ABOUT. HAVE MYSELF BEEN IN THIS SITUATION. FACING MY DEMONS NOT LETTING THEM GET THE BETTER OF ME. STAY STRONG. |
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Re: alone
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by carebear_06 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:03:24 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem! the wording in the poem was awsome |
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Re: alone
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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i owe you a big thank you.
i havnt cut in 7 months, and tonight i had the terrible urge. I was searching for something to help me not to do, to be reminded by someone other than myself of how bad it is and what it does.
your poem did that for me.
im staying strong, with your help. :) |
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