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Someone Please Hold Me
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:55:18 PM in AEST
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I miss you
I miss you so bad
I wish I felt sure
I wish you could last
The time of day
Just wont move past
I wish I could fly
Off this roof, so sad
Memories prick
Inside my aching head
The food in my stomach
Would rather exit my throat instead
A beautiful day tainted red
I need comfort, I need to be held
I miss you
I miss you so bad
I wish you only knew
What you could have had
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:07:58 PM AEST
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this has made me think...
my mum is dieing and has a maximum of a few months to live.
... i guess i'll be thinking like this when she dies...
*sigh*
my heart goes out to you, for the hurt your trapped in now. |
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem I like it, I have felt like that before. |
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me
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by shortcake on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:29:15 PM AEST
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| wow, great poems are hard to find but this one is one of the best |
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:46:13 PM AEST
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i could really feel the emotion and the need.... thats great writing... i have felt like this before and thats a perfect poem to describe it.. good job....
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Re: Someone Please Hold Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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Great write, your emotions come across vividly , LOve this
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